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She, The Woman

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She, the woman.
In his eyes she eclipses.
He felt love.
He spoke of drawing the veil
for his own mental results.
There was but that woman of memory.
I saw this page posted on Tumblr so I decided to try my hand at found poetry. I find it ironic that the writing here is just the opposite of my found poetry. Please let me know what you think!
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winterkate's avatar
Interesting. I like how you've managed to stay with the vein of this page, but change the meaning very fundamentally at the same time. I think this does belong in our Featured folder!