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Love Changes Time by Tikisomia Love Changes Time by Tikisomia
So I found this page on Tumblr somewhere and I decided to box in the words that I liked and I got this. Please let me know what you think of this.
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Dust502 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that came out awesome!
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Tikisomia Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Dust!!! :aww:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
This is good, but I'd suggest adding it to the General Blackout folder instead of the Featured one. One of the things about blackout is that part of the idea is writing about something different than what's on the page - changing it in some way. I feel like this - while wonderful - is a condensed version of the page itself. That being said, love changes time is a brilliant line and you show a lot of real potential.
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Tikisomia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I wasn't quite sure where I should put it...sI just plopped it in there lol! I moved it! Yeah...I'm real new at Blackout poety...I did get a $0.50 book from an antique store that I'm practiceing in right now! I'll try to keep the thought of changing the meaning from the origional meaning! Thanks so much for your comment and your helpful help on this! :meditation:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Writer
You're really welcome, anytime. It's fine to submit to Featured when you think you've got a piece that fits there. If I don't accept, it's not because the piece isn't good - it's just not quite extraordinary yet. Bearing that in mind, I think that for a newcomer, you're exhibiting a lot of natural talent. Feel free to submit to Featured and General anytime you want to, and por favor try the contest! It's gonna be really cool! :D
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Tikisomia Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you soooooooo much for your comments! They've been really helpful and encouraging!
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Haha, you're really welcome. I try to be as gentle and encouraging as possible :)
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Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
I think it you did a better job then the people who wrote, it is hard to sense the deeps of the first one because it uses so many words have have little meaning but you highlighted the deepness words that reflected in its true meaning
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Tikisomia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dawwwww...thank you! I was hoping that someone would like it!
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SmokeyMitchell Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the words you picked out.
It sums this whole page up with few words.
Very nice c:
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